Pernell Rogers – Writer

Archive for May 2nd, 2023

It took less than 30 days for me to complete my first mystery! The hardest part was coming up with the crime. In my last post, I mentioned the setting, and it’s both perfect and relevant. I always walk around the house while I’m developing a story, or get stuck on a specific passage. During the week I developed JUST the crime for my first mystery story, I logged over 35 miles! The funny part was when I finished, I just needed the detectives to solve the crime. It was so much fun. The words and dialogue came so freely.

So that makes 15 stories. I’m going to stop writing fresh stories for a while.

I will spend most of my time editing these stories. I plan on sending my collection of six stories back to my editor for copy-editing in May. so that project continues to move forward. Take care!

Hi all. Don’t let the title fool you. I’m still writing, but once again, I discovered another symptom of my “show the monster and stop” syndrome I seem to suffer from. In my last post, I stated that I’d begin editing my 15 stories. I’ve done extensive edits on the 6 stories for my collection, but the others have had less than 3 revisions.

I pulled out a story that sat on Revision 2. I read through my story, adding and deleting, as necessary. The story held my attention until I got to the end. I’d set up a situation the family had to suffer through. Then the words ‘THE END’ popped up. I re-read the last chapter again, and the story simply ended. Over 23,000 words and the story just stops. I don’t know why I ended it, but I’d omitted the entire section about the family’s predicament.

I needed a satisfying ending, so I started walking while speaking into my recording app on my phone. After 15,000 steps, I had a real ending. So, I added another 12,000 words to tie up every loose end I’d left dangling. Now, in a couple of months, I’ll re-read it again, and see if it really is satisfying.

I’ve been focusing on the endings of all my stories because they’re so important. Take Care!